Evaluation Screening for "Blank" - Feedback

-What did you like?

·        -Sound was good

·        -Sound track was really good

·        -Jump scare at the end

·        -Camera angles- close-ups and canted angles

·        -The wobble effect when blank shows up

·        Good soundtrack

·        -Wide variety of shots

·        -Good font effects

·        -Heartbeat works well

·        -Good jumps

·        -Heart pulse is good

·        -Inter-title font is good

·        -Good jumps

·        -Wobble effect

·        -Good camera angles and use of music

·        -Special fx are good

·        -The music changes were great – real horror feel

·        -Sound fx were really well done

·        -Really cool font

·        -Collision cuts were awesome

·        -Really cool villain

·        -Really like the backing heartbeat

·        -The music x2

·        -Slenderman/ Blank

-What needs to be improved?

·        -More horror aspects

·        -The inter-title text font

·        -More conventions

·        -Lack of low key lighting

·        -Slender in the road – didn't really make sense

·        -More horror conventions – make the screen darker

·        -Voices are too quiet x 3

·        -Too high key

·       - Don’t understand plot of going to the woods – not enough narrative to explain, inter-titles needed x 2

·        -Would have worked better at night

·        -Quick dialogue

·        -The new blurry effect doesn't work as well

-Scores-

10

9.9

9

9

9

8

8

7

7

7

6

Avg = 8.172